Saturday, December 18, 2010

After Take 1

Take 2

Lets try this the other way round,
what do I do with you, she hesitantly asks him. 
He nuzzles his nose on her shoulder and replies with a
question, can you take me with you like the glow of the rainbow in your
pocket…
She smiles and instead ties his thought as a string of bond
around her wrist and puffs away…. 
After she's gone, all he sees is the faint dust of
afterthought 
After she's come far enough, all she sees is the print
of his foot walking away… 
Come on! i can do better than this... or is this as good as it gets, any helpers, edit me!



Love this song! koi aane wala hai....Mann mera pagal dhoondta hai tujhey ghabraake....cool!
So much has happened since last time i came here,
its hard to pick the string at one point and roll it along...
dont know where to begin....
all i've been doing the past few days is carry my kindle with me everywhere, 
since i started reading through kindle,
i cant belive i made it without it for so long!

I remembered something that happened in Gold Coast this evening and couldnt shake it off....
i so miss it.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wait that should have read...

Shit!! that's pretty deep, although i couldn't make shit out of it, I am sure there some deep shit in there, WOW... you go girl!!! OMG did you notice that i used shit in 3 different contexts in the same sentence....

-M again

Kinetic said...

Why doesn't it surprise me that u have limited vocabulary. Somewhere it meant my blog was neat, so I left ur comment there. Looks like the highways have been too good to u. Hi have u heard the song before.... Smokey voice and guitar, what's not to like.

Anonymous said...

Hmm looks like I have to explain you in detail. The first one is used in excitement, the second one is in bewilderment and the third one is used in overwhelming appreciation for what you wrote.. No sarcasm at all but tried to comment in a funny way :)

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